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So..it's Been a While

Fri Apr 17, 2009, 1:49 PM

Yeah I know it seems like I've been dead for the past few months, or however long I've been gone. I've actually been lacking on my novel and I've realized that the best time for me to write it would be in the summer. I'll have more time to commit, yet I also don't want my writing skills to slack. Soo, I was thinking perhaps I can finally finish my naruto fan fiction from forever ago. It's been a while, so I'll probably go back and read every chapter. But I figured I'd might as well finish it, I hardly finish stories and it would benefit my writing. So what do you guys think? Should I go back to, or rather finish Asakusa?

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Watching: Naruto Shippuden
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~x-Just-a-memory-x Apr 17, 2009, 3:33:12 PM

Finish Asakusa, damnit....

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~Kiaryu-Ryukin Apr 17, 2009, 3:41:57 PM

haha, that was fast. I might as well, although, reading the first 4 chapters I found many errors and things I would change, naturally.

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~246XRukiaX246 Apr 19, 2009, 10:43:49 AM

omg~ u should totally finish Asakusa!!!!! i luv that fan fic!!!!

finish it! finish it! finish it!

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~Kiaryu-Ryukin Apr 19, 2009, 5:50:13 PM

.......ehhhhhhhhh, after reading the first 10 or so chapters, I'm highly disappointed in myself for several reasons. One, Kiaryu is a Gary-Stu, and that's something I want to avoid. Two, there's a lot of grammatical errors, it sometimes interferes with the meaning of a certain phrase. Three, it's very cliche in terms of fan fictions, soooooooo.........The possibility of me finishing it is slim yo none. Sorry. However, it doesn't mean I'll stop writing. I'll just redo it.

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"What's the point of life if you're not doing the thing you love?......Nothing!"

~246XRukiaX246 Apr 25, 2009, 9:39:38 AM

aww, dont be disappointed!!!! trust me, ur fan fics are really good. i didn't notice those kind of things...but i'm kinda oblivious -_-"... u should see some of the other ones i've read!

well if u do finish i'd love to read it! :3 nd if u redo it i'd still love to read it!

~Kiaryu-Ryukin Apr 25, 2009, 9:42:46 AM

thanks for the support

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"If you think it and you believe it, you shall receive it"
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"What's the point of life if you're not doing the thing you love?......Nothing!"